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Picture Title: |
Scarlett |
Location: |
My Studio in Torrance |
Photographer: |
Phillip Cohen |
Submission Date: |
3/15/2006 8:47:26 PM |
Comments: |
First portrait session in the new studio. |
Gallery Category: |
Portrait |
Technical Information: |
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Shooting Location: |
My Studio in Torrance |
Camera: |
Fuji S1 Pro |
Lens: |
Nikkor 80-200 f2.8 AF-D |
F Stop: |
F19 |
Film Format: |
Digital |
Film Type: |
Digital |
ISO: |
320 |
Shutter Speed: |
1/125 |
Capture Method: |
Digital Camera |
Digital Resolution & Mode: |
300x200 JPG Fine |
Photographer Information: |
Name: |
Phillip Cohen |
Location: |
Torrance, CA |
About: |
Former Electronics Engineer working in satellite launch operations for Hughes Aircraft Co. Travelled world wide for 20 years building satellite tracking stations and launching satellites. Many photos from my travels. Now full time web monkey and part time photographer and no more travel! ;=] |
Home Page URL: |
http://www.pwcphoto.com |
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Photo Critiques: |
Critiqued 3/18/2006 9:50:12 PM by TomChang, Torrance |
Phil,this portarit color and lighting are pretty good, but I feel you might need to soften the girl's fave, especially on her cheek. Usually you always want to show young lady's smooth skin vs Man's or older people's. |
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Critque Response Entered: 3/18/2006 9:51:51 PM By: Tom Chang - Torrance
Sorry for the typo - I mean "face" |
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Critque Response Entered: 12/8/2006 6:58:10 AM By: rgergerger rgergerger - Bremen
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Critque Response Entered: 12/9/2006 7:13:26 AM By: rgergerger rgergerger - Bremen
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Critque Response Entered: 12/10/2006 12:40:17 AM By: rgergerger rgergerger - New
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Critque Response Entered: 12/11/2006 1:57:15 PM By: rgergerger rgergerger - New
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Critque Response Entered: 12/12/2006 7:22:38 AM By: rgergerger rgergerger - York
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Critque Response Entered: 12/17/2006 8:03:40 AM By: Cheap Caribbean Travel Cheap Caribbean Travel - london
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Critque Response Entered: 12/18/2006 9:36:01 AM By: Tickets Tickets - london
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Critiqued 11/20/2006 1:11:00 PM by NacomaHayden, Las Vegas, NV |
I agree with you Tom, the skin should be smooth. A soft focus filter would do the job. Also you flash... either with a soft box, or indirect with a triflector. This will make that twinkle in her eyes stand out, it would also make those lips very moist looking. |
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Critiqued 11/25/2006 4:00:50 PM by MarieMoyers, Haughton,Louisiana,USA |
Color balance on this photo is right on. Her eyes are on an angle with her head tilted, which gives the photo some interest. The focus is crisp and clear, and the exposure is percisely right.
Should the photographer choose to improve the photo now, a little softening might be applied in photoshop with a small amount of gaussian blur.. erasing the eyes and the lips and the tip of her nose.
With some practice at this photoshop technique it will be as beautifully pulled off as if you did use a filter when the shot was taken.
Great Job.
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